The subculture I picked was Preschoolers. I picked preschoolers
because I have always been interested in little kids and how they learn. I am
also going into the early childhood field. I babysit two twin girls right now
and I have babysat them since they were three years old. Therefore I have had a
lot of experience with them and wanted to know what a classroom environment was
like for preschoolers. I expected to see cubbies for the kid’s belongings and
different areas for the kids to play in. The areas were reading, art, block,
science, computer, and dramatic play.
As soon as I
walk into the environment of infants, toddlers and preschoolers there are lots
of things going on. My main focus is on the preschoolers. I walk on to a soft
carpet near the main entrance and in front of me about 4 feet away I see the
kid’s cubbies where they put their coats, lunch boxes and bags. On the other
side of the cubbies is where the toddlers play. Then on the right side of the
entrance I see a dramatic play area. There is a play kitchen and a small sized
kid’s closet that has dress up clothes in it.
There are lots of shelves in the classroom to create the boundaries of
each play area. Then there is a math
area with puzzles and other fun games. On the other side of the dramatic play
and math area is where the infants play. On the left side of the entrance is
the block area there are big, medium, and small blocks. In the classroom on the tile flooring stands
the art area. There is a shelve of art supplies and in front of the supplies is
a red shaped kidney table. There is a
reading area filled with books and two cushioned chairs. Next to the reading are remains the science
area with tools, orange goo, weighing scale and a rectangle shaped table. Next
to the science area be located the computer center. There are two computers
that the kids can play learning games on. Nearby there is a bubbler and the
restrooms. The walls are half white and
half blue and there is the kid’s art work of cat and the hat faces hanging up
on the wall and yellow painted circles that look like suns. There are windows
in the dramatic play area, block area and the infant and toddler area.
The
preschoolers are all dressed up either in jeans and long sleeve or short sleeve
shirts or dresses. Some of the girls were fashionable boots and the rest of the
boys and girls where sneakers. Also some of the girls either have their hair up
in a ponytail or braids. At school the preschoolers have a schedule that they
follow every day. First they come in and hang up their stuff in there cubbies.
Then they do free play for about an hour and play at the different centers.
Then at like 9 o’clock they get into circle and they listen to a story and sing
songs. I heard one song that they would sing which is “What’s the Weather?” I
see all the kids sitting nicely on their bottoms and I hear, “What’s the
weather? What’s the weather? What’s the weather like today? Is it foggy, partly
cloudy, is it raining or is there snow. Is it windy, is it cloudy or is there
sunshine today. What’s the weather? What’s the weather? What’s the weather like
today?” Then the teacher would have cards with activities on them that each
individual child would have to do. The teacher would call up one child at a
time and the child would pick a card. One child picked a card that said, “Where
do u live?” Then the child would answer. Another card that a child picked was
it said, “find something green.” So the child would go around the room and
touch something green. After the child has picked a card and accomplished the
activity they had to hop to the bathroom like a bunny to go wash their hands to
prepare for snack time. At snack time they all had a bowl of purple yogurt
and a cup of water. After they had their snack they had free play. At the math area three kids were building a puzzle
together. When the kids were building
the puzzle one child was trying to figure out where a piece goes. Therefore a friend of her says that piece doesn’t
go yet. Then she suggested her friend to try another piece. Then I noticed a preschooler decided to take decorative
grass and bring it to the dramatic play area while she walked it over to the
area she was dropping pieces of it on the floor. So when the teacher saw it she said, “Who of
my friends dropped all this grass on the floor?” No one would answer so she said, “I am going
to turn around and count to ten and by the time I turn around I want to see it
all picked up.” As soon as she started
counting four kids started picking it up immediately and as fast as they could. Then it was time to go outside.
The kids got their coats on and the teacher gathered beads and
string to bring outside. There is a fenced in play area so the kids can’t run
away. There are two plastic jungle gyms that have slides. One jungle gym is
triangle shaped and has holes that the kids can climb through and then there is
a slide. The other jungle gym is a little bit bigger and it has stairs and two
slides. In one corner of the play area there is a triangle shaped sandbox.
There are two kids’ sized plastic tables and there is also a wooden house the
kids can play in. Talking to kids is very different from talking to adults.
When we were outside a child stepped on a castle that a child was making. When
the teacher came up to the sandbox Olivia said, “he stepped on my castle.” The
teacher said, “You look very upset about it and asked the boy, did you step on
her castle on purpose or was it by accident?” The boy said, “I did it by
accident” and the teacher said, “Can you say sorry to her?” Another time I saw
was Emma was filling a truck with sand and Hannah comes up and says, “I will
help you.” So the two girls start playing together. Then Emma says, “What are
you doing?” “Digging for treasure”, says Hannah. “Me too”, says Emma. Outside
some kids were making bracelets and necklaces too. Olivia made a necklace and I
tied it for her after she was done and then later on she comes up to me and
says, “I made this necklace for you. “Thank you Olivia! It was very nice of you
and it’s beautiful.” After two minutes pass she comes back up to me and says, “Actually
I made that for me.” So I hand it back to her. That moment just made my day
even though she took it back after. Then it was time for all the kids to line
up and get ready for lunch. When all the kids have hung up their coats and
washed their hands they sit at the table and wait for their lunch to be served.
Some of the lunches the kids have are peanut butter and jelly sandwich, chicken
nuggets, macaroni and cheese, and spaghettio’s. I can hear all the preschoolers
being quiet while they eat their lunch. After they eat their lunch one child
gets all the lunch boxes for all his/her friends and passes them out. Every day
this switches off so everyone gets a turn. After they eat their lunch they are
allowed to have two snacks from their lunch box. Then they are done eating the
lights go off and light music is playing while the kids go to sleep on their
cots.
Over all, I
have had a good experience with the preschoolers. One thing that surprised me
was that when I found out the teacher has her own kid as a student. This
surprised me because usually kids can’t have their own parent as a teacher. I
watched the interaction between the mom and son in the classroom environment
because I thought that would make it tough to teach. The son would always sit
next to his mom during snack and lunch time. Then during reading time all the
kids would sit nicely on the floor will the son would be leaning on his moms
lap. Also, whenever his mom told the
kids to do something and they wouldn’t listen right away the son would always
speak up and tell them what to do like he is in control.
This is a good draft! You have quite a few details to give description of place, and this is well organized and easy to follow.
ReplyDeleteIn revision, I'd suggest that you add a bit more of an intro and conclusion. In the intro, you might introduce your subculture and explain your interest, connection, and expectations about what you were going to see there. Then in the conclusion, reflect for a bit about what you saw: what were the main things you noticed, things that surprised or interested you?
You do take quite a while to get through the place description. Maybe break it up to get to some description of the kids earlier? You cold give an overall description of the space at beginning, then describe some of the spaces as the kids move around the room and through their morning. If you can remember or have notes, I'd like to see more description of what went on in the classroom (you do a great job describing interactions on the playground--more of that sort of specific detail would be great in the earlier part of essay as well).
Remember to break this into paragraphs (maybe you had technical issues with that on the blog?) You have a section on physical description, then the kids, then routine of day, and so forth, each of which could be paragraphs.
A minor point: you use a lot of "is's" and "are's" in the place description. That can make your writing rather static. It's a challenge when you're writing description, but try in places to replace some of those "to be" verbs with more active verbs.
Overall, though, well done, and I'm looking forward to reading the next draft!
You did a great job observing. You were very descriptive and the essay was well organized. Having some experience with children makes the little details more prominent.
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